Comments on Project #4 Draft...

Below is a draft for the upcoming project. It is a glimpse into my (and others') mundane, everyday life through text messages. Dry, boring, but personal, with a few funny, weird, touching parts. I plan on adding some audio, perhaps sound effects. Is it too long? Should I trim it down? Do you like the colors? Or would black and white be better? Thanks in advance for and suggestions.